Snake Posted February 27, 2004 Share Posted February 27, 2004 As i ride in the back of my truck i wonder how i plan to take out the enemy with a M16 10 clips and 10 m203 grenades. I light up a ciggerate and as i was inhalling a shell explodes near the truck the shell was so powerful it knocked me right out of the truck the concussive force of the blast rolled the truck right over. I stare in horror as my 2 squad members burn to a cold dust. My squad was down 2 other squads of 3 men already escaped. I follow hoping to catch up to link them squads and me up into one team to do this coming mission. I cathch up to them heart racing like a dragester at top speed " Your alive! " said the captain of Bravo. They thought i was killed in the explosion but i had always told them i was a survivor in the field. We started moving we had to destroy a fuel depot then a tank hanger while trying not to take any casualties. We trekked 5 miles in dense jungle undergrowth not finding a enemy soldier to blast then we come to a clearing where the fuel depot was. I told them to surround the fuel depot and that was what the squad did but then a tank came right out of the undergrowth, then our comm expert back at a Allied installation told us tha the tank was to guard because they saw some soldiers in the undergrowth. I knew we had botched the insertion, we had to take out that tank soon or that chain gun would shred us in a cloud of blood and flesh while screaming. I told the team that the insertion was f##### up and we would have to eliminate that tank fast! my team each had 15 anti tank weapon rounds and we had a rookie with us i told him to fire at the tank while we snuck in but he missed his shot and the turrent swivled and men ran out to where it came from. He didn't know what to do he drew is rifile and as he took down the commander for the fuel depot he was mauled by the chain gun on the tank and the soldier fire i heard him screaming on the com and i look where he was blood was everywhere on the trees, ferns and ground. there was a fleshy hump where he was i was so ###### i told my team to put a charge at the fuel hanger i ran where his body was a trigger i made in the Ghost Recon editor turned to life i switched my m203 and grenades for it for the Stinger i turned and fired and ran like hell twards cover....... part 2 coming soon...... [ in a few days ] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson Posted February 27, 2004 Share Posted February 27, 2004 Ah, some humor at the right time. Thanks for the story Snake. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted February 27, 2004 Author Share Posted February 27, 2004 Ah, some humor at the right time HUMOR!!!!........ HUMOR!!!!!! a guy getting shrredded up by soldier fire and a chain gun is humor!! you are a sick person Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson Posted February 27, 2004 Share Posted February 27, 2004 You have no clue do you? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted February 27, 2004 Author Share Posted February 27, 2004 (edited) What ever you sick ####### Edited February 27, 2004 by Pave Low Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Ranger Posted February 27, 2004 Share Posted February 27, 2004 Ah, good story Snake. Cheers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormcrow Posted February 27, 2004 Share Posted February 27, 2004 Woah............easy tiger................ .....lets play nice now Like the story snake...........especially the mauling part.........sounds nasty.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Private B Posted February 27, 2004 Share Posted February 27, 2004 wow, now we can smoke in GR...and trucks can turn over...wow, gotta release those mods snake, share the fun Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sart Posted February 27, 2004 Share Posted February 27, 2004 Man 15 ATs... 1 tank. And having to walk 5 miles to get there. Your the man Snake! I wish you could play GR with us! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted February 27, 2004 Author Share Posted February 27, 2004 im adding realism to it so it sounds real thats how good stories are made in here to me add some realism to it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted February 27, 2004 Author Share Posted February 27, 2004 Part 2........ As i ran twards cover my squad was reporting injuries from rikishes i told them im under extremly heavy fire and coming to activate the " Demo Charge " trigger. As im getting there i took a round in the groin i flinch but keep running when i got there i activated the trigger and we RAN to cover as a giant explosion ripped at air the concussive force knocked everyone over in a 12 foot radius. Our support expert started blasting them to where they belong.... for my mauled teammate..... After we cleaned up the fuel depot we started moving twards the tank hangers which were 10 miles aross rivers and light dense jungle undergrowth. We got to the first river and there was a fireflight a rubber craft with a 50. cal gun on it with a driver and a troop with a grenade launcher. I knew that this was a grim situation i took out the greande man then the 50. cal rips the ground to pieces in front of me my team mates are firing at full force at the guys across the river to cover me as i take out the 50. cal. I shot a missile at him from the awsome stinger AA missile launcher and took him and the driver out and the boat kept going then a trigger activated that made it " sink ". We got across the river and it was a challanging hike especialy if your balls hurt from a gun shot there. Ok we encountred a couple sleeping guards and capped them and made more progress twards our goal, we decided to stop and have a ration each and sleep for a few minutes to keep our energy up and stay rested. We had finally reached the tank installation it was well lighted and i was burining all over and my camo was soaked in sweat. We knew there was no turing back the bleeding from my wound stopped and i bandaged it a little. I studied the wound and it wasnt in the groin it was right next to the scrotum, by my thigh. I told my squad that recon showed 50 cal insulations surrounding the place to make it have a fortress-like defense i told my squad not to engage yey but they did not listen.............. part 3 soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson Posted February 27, 2004 Share Posted February 27, 2004 You get shot in man land, then take the Stinger Air-to-Air missile and blow up a truck. You're the best Snake. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sweet_fighter Posted February 28, 2004 Share Posted February 28, 2004 loved the storyies you should be a righter that would be a great book Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted February 28, 2004 Author Share Posted February 28, 2004 Part 3 When my squadmates opened fire i knew we were compromised and tanks started to roll out with chain guns armed and ready out of 7 of us 6 were injured. As the tanks took positions my adrenaline kicked in and i was forgetting about tiredness beacuse if i fell asleep now i would be dead a bloody hump on the ground because of those chain guns plus they were using anti-tank rounds you see in A 10 cannons that explode into a tiny explosion so we were extremly careful not to get hit. Fatigue settles in as my legs carry me away from fire and light security guards using Desert Eagles firing heavy calabir rounds at us. " AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH " i heard a scream it was a squad mate he was mauled byat least 20 anti-tank rounds i find him a smoldiering heap of metal, cloth, darkblood, and a buring smell of..... flesh. I cover my nose and told my squadmates " Bomber is down, I repeat Bomber is down " they all looked at me shocked and at his reminents of his body. I told them to give me cover fire at the guards while i took out the depot. I knew my teammates were gonna do something stupid so i ordered them no hotdogging it or i would leave them behind. They agreed and i activated 3 " Demo Charge " triggers for the depot the firing tanks were inside. I ran under explosions ripped at my body sending shrapnel into my thighs and arms i fell....... I was screaming my teamates drug me into cover and nursed my wounds. Right after they fixed me up the depot blew. Tanks and pieces of tanks went flying everywhere and when it was over it was a condesnt fire ball of beauty. All we had to do now was get to the extraction zone. I kew it was a long way's there about a 2 day journey...... Part 4 soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avey Posted February 28, 2004 Share Posted February 28, 2004 Is this story based on GR? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryan243 Posted February 28, 2004 Share Posted February 28, 2004 Is this story based on GR? I highly doubt that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted February 28, 2004 Author Share Posted February 28, 2004 Avey Ryan [ buzzzzer ] you lose it is based on GR didnt you read all of the parts so far DEMO CHARGE TRIGGER i added realism to it so it sounds better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted February 29, 2004 Author Share Posted February 29, 2004 Part 4 As we made way through the jungle i felt alot better after some moriphine and them removing the shrapnel and bandaging me and as we hiked through we knew there no guards within ear shot. So we found a clearing sat,ate and disscussed about the safest path and the shortest so we wouldnt have to hike for 2 days we found one going down a river by a base of the enemy. We knew it was sucide but we needed to get there as fast as possible to meet up with extraction and i was badly injured. The reason i was nursed of wounds right away because i had the raft for river sailing. 2 miles to the river we hiked them and set the raft in the water and we brought our gear and weapons on. 2 dead teammtes and we are in a inflatable raft....... Not nice to think about but it was all i had to think about as we casted off. We saw the enemy stronghold......... kind of short today but there are 6 parts part 5 you will see what happens next REMBER THIS IS BASED OFF A GR MISSION I PUT REALISM IN IT LIKE YOU WERE A SQUAD COMMANDER IN WAR!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob The Nailer Posted March 5, 2004 Share Posted March 5, 2004 Part 4 As we made way through the jungle i felt alot better after some moriphine and them removing the shrapnel and bandaging me and as we hiked through we knew there no guards within ear shot. So we found a clearing sat,ate and disscussed about the safest path and the shortest so we wouldnt have to hike for 2 days we found one going down a river by a base of the enemy. We knew it was sucide but we needed to get there as fast as possible to meet up with extraction and i was badly injured. The reason i was nursed of wounds right away because i had the raft for river sailing. 2 miles to the river we hiked them and set the raft in the water and we brought our gear and weapons on. 2 dead teammtes and we are in a inflatable raft....... Not nice to think about but it was all i had to think about as we casted off. We saw the enemy stronghold......... kind of short today but there are 6 parts part 5 you will see what happens next REMBER THIS IS BASED OFF A GR MISSION I PUT REALISM IN IT LIKE YOU WERE A SQUAD COMMANDER IN WAR!!! Dude. You'll never make it out alive floating down the river in a raft. Can you say sitting duck? I can. I'm guessing the next installment will have them being cut to ribbons by enemy fire whilst floating merrily down the river. The End. P.S. Maybe it was the morphine and he's really being medivac'd as we speak. He just thinks he's in a raft. It was all a dream. diddleoo, diddleoo, diddleoo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted March 5, 2004 Author Share Posted March 5, 2004 Part 5 We saw the enemy stronghold and anti-ship weapons on the installation we knew 1 shot from a anti-ship 20 inch long gun shell would end all of our lives. but we saw they were in construction so we all had a sigh of relief so far we didn't start the engine on the raft so they wouldn't hear us or detect us on the sonar scans. We were ready to sneak by when a man with a Multiple Round Grenade Launcher spotted us he loaded in 6 HE grenades and fired it exploded 6 feet and 4 men were engulfed the raft was fine i was flung out like a cat swatting hard at a mouse. air got in the raft and made a air tight seal agenst the water the remainer of my squad stayed under it and a GRENADE TRIGGER activated blowing up the long gun closest to us and we kept going we looked like a raft floating down stream with no people flipped over so the terrorists ignored us and kept fixing up the damage that happened. We were far enough away to flip the raft over but when we did we saw half of the engine gone we had spare parts enough to fix it so we did. When we got to the edge of the river into the ocean we saw the extraction boat............... not much action here but in the next and final part do not eat while reading it or don't read it if you just ate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Ranger Posted March 6, 2004 Share Posted March 6, 2004 I think...I just lost my dinner. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Slink Posted March 6, 2004 Share Posted March 6, 2004 Could be an interesting campaign.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob The Nailer Posted March 8, 2004 Share Posted March 8, 2004 Snake! Hurry up and finish this story. We're all on the edge of our seat. Are you writing the finale where Bob The Nailer saves his bacon? I've been in the bush all along. Hmmmm. I likey. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted March 11, 2004 Author Share Posted March 11, 2004 (edited) LAST PART!!!!!!!!!!!! you ready warnoing graphic description of blood geysers you've been warned As we saw the extraction boat as we got near it it retreated it radioed: " We are detecting battleships retreating to a outcropping 50 m out go there" . As soon as the transmission stopped a geyser of water it the front of the raft. " SWIM SWIM!" i screamed at my squad i told them. Us last 5 members swam to the excration zone that was quickly made all around us were geysers and i saw a member engulfed in a geyser blood and no remains blood shooting everywhere and a red fountain where he was. We were half way when one of my squadmates became tired another man went to help then he saw something racing at the 2 of them....... a torpedo. " AAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH" i heard him scream him and the other one went BOOOOMMMMM!!!! in a HUGE geyser of blood and a bloody spot where he was and remains of flesh and bone flying and stung when bone hit us. Me and someone else were the only ones left okay 10 metres left then i heard a raft engine it was a terrorist i swam fast told him to look out and he was hit with 45 bullets i belive? A big gaping hole stood where his insids for his stomach were and he was just about dead he has about 10 seconds i told him that i would make it then he passed on. I was swimming furiously and i got there and they lost us so we went away like a innocent boat. When i got back i was fully treated and i was sent to the Generals office he told me:" You are the obly survivor?" " Yes" i said and he had a grave expression it told me all. He was honoring the men that were killed and told me a ceromony for a medal of honor and a medal of valor was waiting for me i stood tall at the ceromony. As the speech was finish i said a few words and went home. i was at the store when someone told methey wanted to see me i went outside and he told me of another mission i decided to accept........... Thats it folks i hope you enjoyed you know for a 13 year old this is goo to me and i should have my war stories realistic i say This last part i made all real no GR in it Edited March 11, 2004 by Snake Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYR_32 Posted March 11, 2004 Share Posted March 11, 2004 ....ummm....ok... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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