Private B Posted March 11, 2004 Share Posted March 11, 2004 hehe big bird NY oh yeah nice story snake... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob The Nailer Posted March 11, 2004 Share Posted March 11, 2004 WOW! Bravo. Excellent. I just don't know about that soldier that got sleepy while he was trying to save his own life. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted March 11, 2004 Author Share Posted March 11, 2004 Hey guys sesimie street is for kids should i delete the images Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snared_gambit Posted March 12, 2004 Share Posted March 12, 2004 Hey guys sesimie street is for kids should i delete the images What? For kids? You're crazy man. Big bird rocks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Private B Posted March 12, 2004 Share Posted March 12, 2004 Hey guys sesimie street is for kids should i delete the images and hopw are you suppose to that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob The Nailer Posted March 14, 2004 Share Posted March 14, 2004 Hey guys sesimie street is for kids should i delete the images If you delete any image Snake, I swear I'm coming for you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted March 19, 2004 Author Share Posted March 19, 2004 ok bob you will find me playing stae wars galactic battlegrounds or i can do a arm snapping manever like they do in the SEALs Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob The Nailer Posted March 19, 2004 Share Posted March 19, 2004 ok bob you will find me playing stae wars galactic battlegrounds or i can do a arm snapping manever like they do in the SEALs I'm cleaning my guns as we speak. I'll see you directly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted March 20, 2004 Author Share Posted March 20, 2004 hey bob wanna know what i look like go to member information in off topic i may be bad looking but i can fire really accuratly and im extremly setealthy for how i look beath that hotshot ALPHA SQUAD ATTACK AND DESTROY!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted March 24, 2004 Author Share Posted March 24, 2004 Who thinks i should make stories like this? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob The Nailer Posted March 24, 2004 Share Posted March 24, 2004 hey bob wanna know what i look like go to member information in off topic i may be bad looking but i can fire really accuratly and im extremly setealthy for how i look beath that hotshot ALPHA SQUAD ATTACK AND DESTROY!!!! Is that really you? Come on. Is it? When are you going to get online and play with teamspeak? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted March 25, 2004 Author Share Posted March 25, 2004 yes that is me bob ishould write sories like this on here to make some excitement around here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob The Nailer Posted March 26, 2004 Share Posted March 26, 2004 yes that is me bob ishould write sories like this on here to make some excitement around here Oh man should you ever. Give us another story from the field. Karate Kid is from Minnesota as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarauderMike Posted March 29, 2004 Share Posted March 29, 2004 LMFAOPIMP Snake - you da man. Don't change... and keep the stories comin' Bob - You too are da man... I CANNOT wait for you two to team up and share a story of that experience. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob The Nailer Posted March 29, 2004 Share Posted March 29, 2004 Where are you Snake? Are you chicken? I'm waiting in the shadows for you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sgt Rock Posted March 30, 2004 Share Posted March 30, 2004 I've been waiting for Snake for at least 6 months now. This ghillie suit of mine is starting to smell... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted April 5, 2004 Author Share Posted April 5, 2004 Get star wars Galactic battle grounds then i can destroy you with the Galactic Empire Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Josh10524 Posted April 15, 2004 Share Posted April 15, 2004 great story snake, you should be a technical editor for movies, your realism brings the story to life. I know this is off topic, but-well, how do I put it. Usually, in stories like this, the conquering hero returns home triumphantly and bangs the bejesus out of his flag-waving patriotic american large-busted wife/girlfriend/maid. You seem to have neglected this part of the story. I know your sense of realism and emotion could add much to this, and, well, I think your stories need more sex. there, I said it. Anyway, keep up the good work, I think I'll go print this story out to show to my friends, they are always eager to see them when you release them to the public civilians at large. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarauderMike Posted April 15, 2004 Share Posted April 15, 2004 I think your stories need more sex. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sup Posted April 15, 2004 Share Posted April 15, 2004 (edited) I liked the story, but found it very hard to read. It had many formatting, tense, spelling, and grammatical errors. So, as long as snake doesn't mind, I'm posting this: An edited version. THIS IS AN EDITED VERSION OF A STORY BY SNAKE As we saw the extraction boat as we got near it, it retreated. It radioed: " We are detecting battleships retreating to a outcropping 50m out. Go there!" . As soon as the transmission stopped a geyser of water it the front of the raft. "SWIM! SWIM!" I screamed at my squad. Us last 5 members swam to the excraction zone, which was quickly made. All around us were geysers and I saw a member engulfed in a geyser blood and no remains blood shooting everywhere and a red fountain where he was. We were half way when one of my squadmates became tired. Another man went to help then he saw something racing at the 2 of them....... a torpedo. " AAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH" I heard him scream him and the other one went BOOOOMMMMM!!!! in a HUGE geyser of blood and a bloody spot where he was, and remains of flesh and bone flying. It stung when bone hit us. Me and someone else were the only ones left okay. 10 metres left then I heard a raft engine. It was a terrorist I swam fast told him to look out. He was hit with 45 bullets, I believe? A big gaping hole stood where his insides for his stomach were, and he was just about dead. He had about 10 seconds I told him that I would make it, and then he passed on. I was swimming furiously and I got there and they lost us so we went away like a innocent boat. When I got back I was fully treated, and I was sent to the Generals office. He asked me:" You are the only survivor?" " Yes" I said. He had a grave expression. It told me all. He was honoring the men that were killed, and told me a ceremony for a medal of honor and a medal of valor was waiting for me. I stood tall at the ceremony. As the speech was finished I said a few words and went home. I was at the store when someone told me they wanted to see me. I went outside and he told me of another mission. I decided to accept........... Edited April 15, 2004 by sup Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sgt Rock Posted April 15, 2004 Share Posted April 15, 2004 I'm fascinated by the man-seeking torpedo. Was is launched from a fast attack boat, or a PT boat, or did a Sea Stallion drop it in the water? Did you use dolphins carrying explosives to sink the battleships? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarauderMike Posted April 16, 2004 Share Posted April 16, 2004 I liked the story, but found it very hard to read. It had many formatting, tense, spelling, and grammatical errors. So, as long as snake doesn't mind, I'm posting this: An edited version. edyted?!?! i thinck the charm of snake storys is their lak of any grammatical stuff so now i read youre story like a normal one and thats is no good cuz now its like everyone else wich is not good. and takes the fun away. but good job sup. cuz its better.....but not the SNAKE!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted April 22, 2004 Author Share Posted April 22, 2004 Thank You Mike Sup i don't belive you got copyright for this..... COURT CASE!! lol i crack myself up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarauderMike Posted April 23, 2004 Share Posted April 23, 2004 Thank You Mike No worries SNAKE. Keep them coming though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue_Assasin Posted April 24, 2004 Share Posted April 24, 2004 But in your next stories, if you do make some more, add some take out the stuff you only see in holly wood, like the man seeking torpedo's, and each guy carrying 15 rounds off rockets or whatever it was. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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