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MOBILE SUIT GUNDAM: DARK SECRETS

It is the Universal Century year 100, 13 years after Zeon rennaments commenced and succeded in Operation Stardust which was a colony drop onto Earth. 90% percent of the population of Earth now live in terraformed Space Colinies that orbit the Earth. It is also the time where Mandkind with DNA can reborn a person and make them younger. Wars were fought using humaniod weapons called "Mobile Suits" where humans pilot these war machines agenst each other. Our story begins in a goverment meeting between the Colony goveners and Earth Federation goverment. "Christ so you want the Albion to resupplied by our avanced mobile suit technoligy?" asked a Colony govener. "Yes, because Gundam unit 3 is too heavily damaged to be repaired we need you with Anheim Electrinics to create a mobile suit for an Ace Pilot." Many questions were said to the Albion's captain and he was about to speak when a shadow appeared in the doorway "Kou Uraki reporting in sirs." said the shadow. "Kou you are to go with the govener of Side 5 to recive a new mobile suit." said the Govener of Earth. 2 days later Kou was piloting a Mobile Suit that he was allowed to make desisions on parts, Armor, Weapons, generator, booster and so on he called it Gundam Stardust. Gundam Stardust was extremly manerverable and mobile that a Mobile Armor couldnt keep up very well. Meanwhile in a Side knowen as Side3 where the original Zeon uprising took place a civillian who still belived in Zeon bought the capsule that makes people young and reborns them. The capsule was called from the producers "Giver of Life". The civillian went to his room to where a vial of DNA was on his dresser he went to pick it up.........................

you will find out who's DNA it is in the next episode and if you know the ENTIRE gundam series this is my own before After Century

EDIT* how do you make text bigger and change it and etc. :(

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After a while of writing and planning i have got thew next episode ready?

As the civillan approched the vial of someones DNA it felt like the room was cowarding in terror as the Zeon civillain moved in closer. The civillain even didnt know whos DNA it was yhe had to remove the sticker to see and put it in the machine. He was tense sweat streaming down his face this vial came in the mail from a other Zeon freind of his. As he started to peel off the label to see the name under it he was wondering who it was. He started to shake tension running through his veins and bones he was in his own pocket of time. Meanhile onboard the Albion "Get the mobile suits ready to launch we just detected a ship from Axis fleet all hands on deck combat status 1!" yelled the Captain. "This is it" Thought Kou Uraki as he started up Gundam Stardust now knowing it had a large gatling gun as its main weapon and a HUGE missle launcher on the back. He was the only mobile suit to launch so Kou flew twoards the ship from Axis Fleet a Large fleet from Zeon remmants as Kou drew nearer a large blast blew away his shield. "What was that Mega Particle cannon shot fired from?" asked Kou to space. Then a large green mobile armor with 2 legs was flying twoards him "Albion what is this monster!?" asked Kou. "It is the BIG-ZAM a massive mobile armor that can destroy a ship with 1 shot and can withstand lots of punishment, also it has a I-field so its unaffected by Beam and energy weapons execpt a Beam Saber make sure it dosent get close to the Albion!" said the Albions Radio Operator. Meanwhile, the civillan was in shock of who's DNA it was: Anavel Gato the Nightmare of Solomon. A Master non-Newtype pilot the civillan quickly drained the DNA into the machine and went to bed..........

The story will get better and the Fight with the BIG-ZAM is gonna be good dont miss the next episode :D

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  • 2 weeks later...

well im still finishing my Mobile Suit Gundam story and after i finish writing it on paper ill put the rest up on here and make a action filled story

how does that plan sound?

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Lol you have Never heard of Mobile Suit Gundam? :rofl::rofl::rofl::rofl::rofl::rofl:

Whre the hell have u been you can see Gundam SEED on cartoon network and you can get movie DVDs i am a major fan of it and the games kick @$$.

Im making my first story about it well go here

www.gundamoffical.com

here they have all the series even the sub series in Universal Century.

Try the games somethimes yoiu would probaly think who the hell you are using well Silent Night if you want to know who Anavel Gato is go to universal century and click on Gundam 0083

and dont ckick on the flash picures of the colony {the cylander with 3 rods sticking out of it} use the yellow bar above it and for characters in a series go to Characters if you want to see the Mobile Suits or Mobile Armors click on mechanics

ill leave you guys to check it out post comments if u wish

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next PART!!!!!!!!

As the BIG-ZAM drew nearer to Gundam Stardust the Albion's Radio Operator threw a scan on it it wasnt a actual BIG-ZAM it was modified with 40 missile launcher along with 28 Mega Particle Cannons. The BIG-ZAM's pilot never said a word he fired 3 missiles from all 40 launchers at the Albion. "Captain were locked on by them missiles we gotta do something!" said a crewmember. Meanwhile.............

As the civillian awoke he noticed he didnt hear the machine working he thought it was done he had a tailor make clothes for Gato before he checked. He saw the Nightmare of Solomon, Anavel Gato reborn in front of him stanting tall in a water with a breathing mask on wating to get out. The civillain swithced on the intercom and prepared to speak. "Are you awake Gato?" asked the civillain. Gato was waking up when he felt a soothing liquid go in his eyes he awoke in liquid he saw he had a mask on to have him breathe. "Wh.......Wh...........Who are you?" asked Gato. "Im Karius i was one of your top pilots in your command." said Karius. Gato was shocked he was alive but he had died when he crashed the Neue Ziel into a Federation cruser. "Why am i here?" asked Gato in suprise. "This machine, brought you back from death i spent all the money i had to get a blood sample you gave before the batle you killed yourself and the money also went to this machine" said Karius. "What happend to Zeon?" asked Gato. "Zeon is now dead all there is still are the remmandents of Axis fleet nothing else they also have the astroid Axis." said Karius. Meanwhile in space near the Earth's moon

Kou Uraki was having a serious struggle with the Modified Big Zam he flew to the moon's surface the Big Zam was right behind him. HE notieced from when he read about the Big Zam that it was extremly slow but this one was just about as fast as Gundam Stardust. Kou boosted to the nearest hill and drew his Beam Rifle he fired and it bounced of the Big Zam's I field. The Big Zam fired a blast from its Large Mega Particle cannon and it wiped out the hill and sent Stardust flying through space into a hill. "Were coming in for backup!" said the commander of Delta Squad a group of Guncannons which were humaniod [as are most mobile suits] and had 2 240mm cannons on its shoulders and had a beam pistol as its main weapon with vulcan guns on its head 5 Guncannons launched from the Albion's Mobile Suit bay and the Big Zam had little cannons open up that were beam macine guns it fired all 15 at the Guncannons and shreded them up.........

The battle will continue next episode and to find out about the Mibile Suits like Big Zam and Guncannon go to the Site i made a link to and use the yellow bar where it has the picure of space and go to universal Century and go to the very top link in the picure and go to Mechanics and look at other suits in the Mobile Suit Gundam and look at the characters if you have characters that you like from them put them up here and i will tell you the ones i like ok?

Good Day

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ANNOUNCEMENT:

DUE TO THE FACT IM GETTING VERY LITTLE COMMENTS IN THIS THREAD NOW IM DROPPING MY MOBILE SUIT GUNDAM STORY AND GOING ONTO A NEW STORY!!!!

new stroy copm9ing to this thread very soon in the near future dont hestate just be patenint im wroting the first part take a guess on what its about if you like thank you for reading.

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Past war story full of action:

I was online with 4 freinds and we went to a edited Docks map my freind made and here it goes. As we came into the area via Helicopter i was prepping my OICW for comat not knowing the enemy was well armed. But i was Fearless,Ruthless, and Rentless, i knew i was better then all of them. As we got very close to the docks we heard the enemy missile lock acived alarm. "We have a hot LZ, I repeat, Hot LZ do a hot drop now!" said the pilot. We quickly put our bags of gear on and went to the rop then i heard "Fwumpffffff" i knew they fired it hit the helicopter and we went sprawled in mid-air to the ground. I landed shaken but my freinds knocked out i held 4 men off while they awoke to gunfire. We advanced foreward to the first building i told them to breech,bang, and clear the building's front office. 2 men were killed in the process but the first room was clear. Then 1 of my last two freinds ran ahead i told him "You Idiot! you will get killed" ........ he didnt hear in time a mounted minigun teared him apart spraying blood all around the hallway it was no longer a white hall but in where his remains were a red hall of bone, and flesh with blood everywhere. i decided to throw a grenade in each room BANG, BANG, BANG from 3 grenades in each room. As we cleard the building we heard chatter on enemy frequency. They were gonna set a trap for us but we quickly secaped my freind biting the bullet on the way. I was alone but i wasnt scared i armed my OICWs grenade function and went to the trap and fired into the fray and i saw 3 Anti- Tank rockets coming in my direction...................

continued soon :thumbsup:

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Hey Snake, honestly, how much of this is embellished? Could you give us an all facts version?

Post approved 10:27/19/5/2004

hmmm, facts, hmmm

da facts:

  • He played GR
  • There were guns
  • People Died

Who cares, snakes stories are good read (well, they're good stories, just not good to read ) :wacko:

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@sup: post moderation? smooth.

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