MarauderMike Posted April 26, 2004 Share Posted April 26, 2004 ... add some take out the stuff ... Which is it? add some...or take it out? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted May 4, 2004 Author Share Posted May 4, 2004 I think your stories need more sex. Uhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Josh why did you say SEX and why bang his girlfreind, wife,....... MAID ARE YOU CRAZY OR SOMETHING ummm my stories are combat and death not the bad thing mind you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninjas_eat_pirates Posted May 13, 2004 Share Posted May 13, 2004 I love this thread. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WytchDokta Posted May 13, 2004 Share Posted May 13, 2004 (edited) THIS IS ANOTHER EDITED VERSION OF THE STORY BY SNAKE We saw the extraction boat up ahead. As we got near to it, the boat retreated. It radio'd: " We are detecting battleships retreating to a outcropping 50m out. Go there!" . As soon as the transmission stopped a geyser of water it the front of the raft. "SWIM! SWIM!" I screamed at my squad. Us last 5 members swam to the excraction zone, which was quickly made. All around us were geysers and I saw a member engulfed in a geyser blood and no remains blood shooting everywhere and a red fountain where he was. We were half way when one of my squadmates became tired. Another man went to help then he saw something racing towards the 2 of them....... a torpedo. "AAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH" I heard him scream him and the guy was blown up in a HUGE geyser of blood. There was a bloody spot where he was, and remains of flesh and bone went flying. It stung when bone hit us. Me and someone else were the only ones left okay. 10 metres left then I heard a raft engine. It was a terrorist I swam fast told him to look out. He was hit with 45 bullets, I believe? A big gaping hole stood where his insides for his stomach were, and he was just about dead. He had about 10 seconds I told him that I would make it, and then he passed on. I was swimming furiously. I got there and they lost us so we went away like a innocent boat. When I got back I was fully treated, and I was sent to the Generals office. He asked me:" You are the only survivor?". "Yes" I said. He had a grave expression. It told me all. He was honoring the men that were killed, and told me a ceremony for a medal of honor and a medal of valor was waiting for me. I stood tall at the ceremony. As the speech was finished I said a few words and went home. I was at the store when someone told me they wanted to see me. I went outside and he told me of another mission. I decided to accept........... Well the spelling you corrected ain't that good either....so I have corrected it for you all out there. And what's with using and again and again and all the time? And. Jeez, sum ov the spelllllllllin wott eye see heere iz terrubul Edited May 13, 2004 by -[NCM]- .:Nightmare:. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarauderMike Posted May 14, 2004 Share Posted May 14, 2004 Snake? Snake? Can't you see we are pining for another story!?! Good Lord man we're editing your old ones... Again! Snake....? :'( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sup Posted May 17, 2004 Share Posted May 17, 2004 Snake? Snake? Snake....? Sorry to interject, but: Snake? SNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKE!!!! PS: My edit was better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob The Nailer Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 S N A K E • S N A K E S N A K E • S N A K E S S S N N N A A A K K K E E E S N A K E • S N A K E S N A K E • S N A K E S S S N N N A A A K K K E E E S N A K E • S N A K E S N A K E • S N A K E S S S N N N A A A K K K E E E S N A K E • S N A K E S N A K E • S N A K E S S S N N N A A A K K K E E E S N A K E • S N A K E S N A K E • S N A K E S S S N N N A A A K K K E E E S N A K E • S N A K E S N A K E • S N A K E S S S N N N A A A K K K E E E S N A K E • S N A K E S N A K E • S N A K E S S S N N N A A A K K K E E E S N A K E • S N A K E S N A K E • S N A K E Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magnumkp Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 I liked the story, but found it very hard to read. It had many formatting, tense, spelling, and grammatical errors. So, as long as snake doesn't mind, I'm posting this: An edited version. THIS IS AN EDITED VERSION OF A STORY BY SNAKE As we saw the extraction boat as blah blah blah I ruined a perfectly good story Sup, you are ruining the true grit and fear that Snake imparts in his stories. Without those hot off the press typos etc, they are just another lame story. As you can see from this thread http://www.ghostrecon.net/forums/index.php...topic=11274&hl= Fear the Snake. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarauderMike Posted June 3, 2004 Share Posted June 3, 2004 I see you lurking Snake!!!! Time for a story!!!! Snake! Snake! Snake! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted June 3, 2004 Author Share Posted June 3, 2004 HI i am back after i was on Armored Core Online because im a fan of armored core ok off that and onto my topic for this post. I WILL BE PUTTING STORIES I MAKE IN HERE TO GIVE PEOPLE A DOSE OF ACTION!!!] Thank You. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted June 3, 2004 Author Share Posted June 3, 2004 Sup about editing my story I DO MIND!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob The Nailer Posted June 3, 2004 Share Posted June 3, 2004 Put them up now or I slappa you face. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted June 3, 2004 Author Share Posted June 3, 2004 OK i have a story to tell im making stories now scince i have shared just about my whole GR battles here it is: July 2005 THe USS Misouri the battleship built to avenge Peral Harbor came to sea after the Atomic Bomb dropped on Hiroshima, Japan. The Misouri is on its last voyage from Hawaii to Calafornia. Inside of the ship is a particular cook his name Casey Nolan. " Hey Casey, why don't you have your whites on man?" asked a Navy Man. "Hey im out of the Navy rember im a ex-SEAL" and he kept on walking. The Captain loved Casey's cooking he was the best cook onboard the captain would rambel about on and on. But a bigger plot was gonna arise that would make a dark stain in the Misouri's history. There was gonna be a party on the Misouri and it was also the Captain's birthday. The crew planned to land a copter chinnok class with cators and a band plus a playboy model and also, dinner. Casey was in the galley area with his fellow cooks they were chatting and laughing. Then a cook challenged a tourist to a dance competion so Casey took out the radio and started it up. It lasted for a minute before Commander Kreel came in. " What the hell is going on here?" asked Kreel. Then Kreel reeled himself and said "Dinner is being flowen in from hawaii and no more cooking here i want the galley cleaned and all of you are to report to the mess hall deck in 17 hundred hours now get going!" After the commander left they kept cooking and cooking. Then Commander Kreel came again and said" I thought i gave you men orders now get out of here!" Casey started to move. "Casey, stand fast" said Kreel. Everyone left except Kreel, Casey and 3 marines. "You know Nolan?, i have been sick and tired of you the Captain thinks you are a good cook but i think you are a fly that i should get rid off you know? this is good sauce that you got". Kreel then spitted in Casey's pot of sauce for pasta. " Adds to the flavor." said Kreel. "Are you gonna do something about it?!" taunted Kreel. Then Casey shoved him. "You are striking an officer Cheif" said a marine. "That isn't striking an officer this is." Then Casey threw a vicous suckerpunch at Kreel and nailed Kreel in the cheek spitting a ton of skin on impact. "Bring him to the brig" said a marine. " No! in the meat locker" said Kreel. After Casey was put in there Kreel said, "Private Nash i want you to make sure he is contained i do not want him to be runing the party if he tries to escapse shoot him." "Yes sir" said Nash. Meanwhile while Casey was arguing with Nash the band was playing upstairs and after a few songs The leader asked on the microphone, "Who is the highest ranking officer in this room?" and a man stepped forward. "So you are the highest ranking officer in this room?" asked the band leader. "Yes i am Bridge 3rd command name Lt. Ryan." " Nice to meet you Lt. Ryan" then the band leader pulled out a gun.......... To be continuted in next post Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob The Nailer Posted June 3, 2004 Share Posted June 3, 2004 OH MY GAWD!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I'M ON THE EDGE OF MY SKIDMARKED SEAT AFTER READING THAT!!! I PINCHED A LOAF IT WAS SO INTENSE. DON'T MAKE US WAIT TOO LONG FOR THE NEXT INSTALLMENT. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2nd Ranger Posted June 3, 2004 Share Posted June 3, 2004 Sounds suspiciously like Under Siege, but I'll go along with it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted June 3, 2004 Author Share Posted June 3, 2004 (edited) hey don't worry about it bob the next part is gonna be good just give me some time and the next part will will the post Edited June 3, 2004 by Snake Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted June 3, 2004 Author Share Posted June 3, 2004 Sounds suspiciously like Under Siege, but I'll go along with it. yeah i got some if it from under siege but im making some stuff up. Under Siege is a kick @$$ movie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avey Posted June 3, 2004 Share Posted June 3, 2004 Congrats Snake, you been brushing up on you're English Language skills? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sup Posted June 3, 2004 Share Posted June 3, 2004 Congrats Snake, you been brushing up on you're English Language skills? If he has, I'm afraid to look back at the old ones... Good story so far, snake. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted June 5, 2004 Author Share Posted June 5, 2004 hey guys just a little more time im just about done and im also searching for the Mech Warrior 4 Clan and Inner Sphere mech Paks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Josh10524 Posted June 5, 2004 Share Posted June 5, 2004 There are no words to describe the quality of your work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dagger Posted June 6, 2004 Share Posted June 6, 2004 Sounds suspiciously like Under Siege, but I'll go along with it. Thats what I thought Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarauderMike Posted June 7, 2004 Share Posted June 7, 2004 Finally, the Snake returns... @ Bob - LMAO. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SniperMaN25 Posted June 8, 2004 Share Posted June 8, 2004 (edited) That last story reminds me of something Tom Clancy or Clive Cussler would write. Congrats on making me intersted You have a new fan now. Edited June 8, 2004 by SniperMaN25 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted June 10, 2004 Author Share Posted June 10, 2004 Next Part The Band Leader drew a gun and fired at Lt. Ryan in the forehead with a instant kill the caterers drew their uzis and killed all of the marines in the room and took evryone else in there hostage even the Playboy Model. it was a disorganized mess and when the boat was under contol the terrorists had brought in a tecnition and he took over the ship's systems the Misouri was taken over. Meanwhile, the terorists have an unsecured area the Galley. " I hear gunfire what is going on?" asked Casey. Private Nash then got nervous and put his hand on his Bretta 92F and walked around looking for the intruders. "We have an unsecured area sir" said the tecnician. "What!, they had accses to the ship all the way" said another terrorist. "Dave" said the Band Leader. Dave was the tecnician "Unlock every electronic lock now!" said the Band Leader. "Yes Bill" said Dave and with a few tiny clicks all electric locks were unlocked. Bill said "You, get 2 men to the galley and secure it." "Yes Sir" said the Captain. " Kreel. you are now promoted to captain the ship is yours." said Bill. "It is?!" said Kreel. "Im gonna go grab something to eat for us" said Kreel. Nash was walking around the Galley when he heard a door open "Commander Kreel is that you?" said Nash then he heard a wisper behind him he turned around and the terrorist told him to put his hands up and to get on his knees. Then the terrorist took his Bretta and backed up and fired a burst into Nash he fell over like a door. The terrorists found the Meat Locker and opened it and filled the room with bullets. Casey was waiting in a vent cover when a Terrorist was below him he swung it open on his head and kicked the other guy over. he ran out and locked the locker and he went over to Nash and rolled him over blood coming out of his mouth eyes open in a glossy stare. No pulse, he was dead, he took the handcuff keyes off Nash and heard a terrorist yell " That son of a ######!" then they fired at the door hitting the lock. Casey shut off the lights and went through a door into the coking part of a Galley and too koff his handcuffs and threw off his cook uniform to reveal a green musle shirt and was wearing millitary pants with pouches. He grabbed his cutting knife off the board where he sticks it in and snuck close to a Terrorist and knifed him. "Ziggs?" asked the other terrorist and was very careful and Casey took aim and threw the knife at his neck and killed him. Casey the went over to the one he threw the knife at and took his vest and unsilenced MP5 and went over where they keep their cooking liquids he took a cup and shoved some steel wool in it and grabbed some cooking oil and put it in there with Vinager to the brim and went over to the microwave and set the timer to continous cook and lefy the Galley. He snuck along and saw a man and took him out by snapping his neck with one move and kept going. He went into the captain's room and there he was slain full of holes. Casey went over to his chair and took the Captain's navy uniform and laid it on top of the Captain's corpse and honored the Captain in silence. Casey went into the Mess Hall where the band was playing and was checking the rooms he went through a door to the armory where he grabbed a bag of guns with ammo for each. He heard someone in the locker behind him he turned around MP5 at the ready used 1 hand to open the locker and with quick speed put it back in firing position and a man was there a freind of Caseys. "Jack what the hell are you doing in there?" asked Casey. "I ran from the guards and hid in ehre they lost track of me and i stayed in here" said Jack. Jack was a SEAL like Casey they served in the same squad of SEALs. Casey and Jack are both ex-SEALs. Casey gave Jack a MP5K with a LAM (Laser Aiming Modul) "Ready to Rock Jack?" asked Casey "Yeah Cas!" said Jack. Casey gave Jack a terrorist vest and together they set out through the ship......... Continued in next post or 2 or 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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