Bob The Nailer Posted June 10, 2004 Share Posted June 10, 2004 Holy crap! What happened to the Playboy model? Did they shag her silly? Did she have machine gun jubblies like in Austin Powers? For cry eye please continue! I hope she makes it out unharmed and is able to throw another fantastic spread in the August issue centerfold. Didn't mean to give away the ending or anything if that's it. Sorry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarauderMike Posted June 10, 2004 Share Posted June 10, 2004 Snake keep it up buds... Bob you schmuck!!! Let Snake tell his story!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted June 10, 2004 Author Share Posted June 10, 2004 Next Part As Jack and Casey went through the ship the terrorists put all hostages in the forecastle and sealed them in. "Casey terrorst at 12o'clock" whispered Jack. Casey took 1 of his Knives and threw it at the terrorist killing him he retrived his knife and they kept going. They made it to outside where the Chinook was landed Casey told Jack to cover him and Casey ran across the flight deck with overwelming stealth picking up a can of Gas on the way. We went to the other side where the Terrorists couldn't see him and took his knife and stabbed the can open and poured it on the Fuel tank on the side of the Chinook and took a fragmentaion grenade and pulled the pin and held the lever down and put the Gas can on it so when it became too light it would begin counting down Casey purposly allowed him to get spotted and strated running with a hook and rope twoards the edge and jumped off. The Heli exploded in a deadly fireball of immense heat and shrapnel killing 5 Terrorists. Casey climed back up and went to a storage bin and grabbed a satalite radio and dialed a number to Naval headquarters and put the satalite radio on standby and too the SEAL magnaphone from it and went back to Jack. Jack said "You found a SEAL magnaphone? Great call HQ" so Casey did meanwhile at Naval HQ. Admiral Bates was the Naval admiral and 1 hell of a admiral. "Sir i got something" said a secratary. "Do you know Casey Nolan?" the Admiral asked the SEAL director "Cheif Nolan yeah best SEAL their is." "Well him and his freind Jack are on the Misouri" said the Admiral. "Listen up!" said the Admiral. "there are about 30 men that came on but we dispached 10 of them so 20 are left on the ship" said Casey. "Casey this is Admiral Bates we want you to sabatoge radar and weapons systems so we can bring in your old SEAL buddies and feed us on inside intel while we preperate." "Yes sir i better get off before they detect the signal" said Casey "Get back to us in a half an hour Cheif Good Luck" said Admiral and he cut the signal. "Jack do you know where the Radar contols are?" Said Casey. "In the Bridge but thats heavily guarded i know where the power box is that leads to it so we should take that out." said Jack. Then Casey heard Morse Code "Whats that?!" said Jack. "Morse Code" said Casey. " What are they saying?" asked Jack. "They're saying Get Me The ###### Out" said Casey. Then Casey picked up a welder and started welding the door open............... Continued Next Post Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob The Nailer Posted June 10, 2004 Share Posted June 10, 2004 They're going to need more of that "overwhelming stealth" to get on that bridge Snake. Don't let us down Casey. Gulp! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarauderMike Posted June 10, 2004 Share Posted June 10, 2004 They're going to need more of that "overwhelming stealth" to get on that bridge Snake. Don't let us down Casey. Gulp! Casey = For the love of CHEMS man finish the story!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted June 10, 2004 Author Share Posted June 10, 2004 Next Part Casey finished welding and kicked the door in there were some more of his freinds he gave them all Uzis and told them to come with him and Jack. He tld his freind who was a black Bob to grab his tools to sabatoge the ships power to all except the 5 inch guns what they didn't know was that that paricuar area where the generator is was heavily guarded. When they arrived they were fired upon Casey and Jack covered Bob as he worked Casey in 5 Minutes took out 5 men and Jack 10 5 men remaning on the ship the big boys. "Now that their radar is down and weapon systems hould be dead soon we should be able to get the SEAL team in then they heard a announcemnt "The sub we were supposed to rendevous with has arrived" said the Speaker, Casey tuned into the private frequency between the ship and sub "Get your anti-air men out before our power went out and we detected a chinook and a Apache Gun Ship shoot them down!" said Bill. Casey got on the SEAL magnaphone to the Choppers "Back off they have stingers on a sub give me a minute im outside ill sabatoge the Stinger launchers!" said Casey the copters aknowliged and backed off quickly Casey seeing them men there took his knives and threw them at all 3 men on deck 1 in each they all fell in the water no mark their AA-Defense was gone. Casey went back into hiding "Ok move im at the flight deck land them!" said Casey the 2 minutes later the Chinnok landed a 16 man SEAL team that we all of Casey's old Freinds. "Admiral the SEALs have landed safely 5 men are left but the sub brought in reinforcements of 10 soldiers with russain commando gear" said Casey on the radio to HQ a SEAL gave him "Affirmative cooperate with SEAL team 5 im out" said Admiral Bates. "Ill go sabatoge the sub's submerging system you guys secure the boat ill get the bridge ill have 2 men come with me if thats ok with you" said Casey to the team Commander. "Go ahead nice to see you Cheif thanks" said the Commander. Casey went to the room where the Tomahawks were there were 8 nuclear tipped tomahawks that had 220 kg of nuclear explosive. Casey made a bomb by dismataling the Nuke and using the Fuel as the detonator and took a Condom and made a detonator switch out of it with wiring attache to his home made bomb. He went outside in a swimming suit staying near the Boat and saw the sub. He swam quietly to it and the Terroist Captain saw him and yelled that someone was in the water then the 2 SEALs fird their silenced M4 SOCOMs at them taking them out they threw a hook in the water and it impaled Casey in the back cutting him open he threw the bomb and hit the switch blowing up the right wing's submerge bar and got out of the water blood streaming down his back. The terrorist Captain found him and said "You know Nolan you are amazing too bad you aient cooking for us" he raised his Uzi then the SEALs shot him up. They carried Casey to the place wehre he took the satalite radio and took the Medkit there and pached him up then his freinds met up with them and they decided to go for the bridge where the reinforcements went......... Will be continued in next post or so Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarauderMike Posted June 10, 2004 Share Posted June 10, 2004 They carried Casey to the place wehre he took the satalite radio and took the Medkit there and pached him up... You kill Casey off Snake and I'll hunt you down...I swear it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob The Nailer Posted June 10, 2004 Share Posted June 10, 2004 Where is the centerfold in all this? Can't you do some sort of "meanwhile in another part of the ship" type scenario? It needs more sex in it. The muscle shirt Casey had on was kinda hot, but we want that centerfold in some hardcore combat action. Maybe she could be fighting off those terrorist marauders whilst bobbing and weaving some heat seeking missiles or something like that. Just a suggestion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sup Posted June 10, 2004 Share Posted June 10, 2004 (edited) Overwhelming stealth, honestly, is a brilliant (and perhaps unintentional) turn of phrase. **EDIT** Okay, I'm confused. He made a nuke out of some tomahawks and a condom, and then detonated it right beside a large force of seals? Edited June 10, 2004 by sup Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted June 10, 2004 Author Share Posted June 10, 2004 Overwhelming stealth, honestly, is a brilliant (and perhaps unintentional) turn of phrase. **EDIT** Okay, I'm confused. He made a nuke out of some tomahawks and a condom, and then detonated it right beside a large force of seals? Sup IT WAS THE TERRORST SUB!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sup Posted June 10, 2004 Share Posted June 10, 2004 Isn't radiation a problem? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarauderMike Posted June 11, 2004 Share Posted June 11, 2004 No sup because a condom was used it shaped the explosion into the sub, thereby containg both the yield and forcing it to implode. Which as everyone knows will kill all WITHIN the path of the blast, but not irradiate ouside of the sub... got it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sup Posted June 11, 2004 Share Posted June 11, 2004 You shouldn't make fun of snake. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarauderMike Posted June 11, 2004 Share Posted June 11, 2004 You shouldn't make fun of snake. I was serious.... look it up... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob The Nailer Posted June 11, 2004 Share Posted June 11, 2004 You shouldn't make fun of snake. I was serious.... look it up... It's true sup, I've used condoms to shape explosions into a great many things myself. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted June 11, 2004 Author Share Posted June 11, 2004 SUP *DISMANTALING* A NUCLEAR TOMAHAWK sup dismantaling a nuke means taking out the pletonuim and the nuclear explovsives Christ i knew that scince i was 7 the condom was used as a button to detonate it when he was away and no it wasnt a nuke it was a homemade stachel charge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted June 11, 2004 Author Share Posted June 11, 2004 Next Part Kreel and Bill with a few terrorsts went to the galley for something to eat they saw their dead comrades. Bill checked the man with the knife and said "Damn,the man who did this is a proffesional." He had saw Casey's file that Kreel gave to him and he saw that Casey was a expert with Tatics, Explosives, Martial Arts, Weapons. Then they heard a beeping and looked at the microwave "BOMB!" Bill Yelled and him and Kreel got down next to a flipped over table and hid then it blew 2 terrorists plus the dead ones were filled with plastic shrapnel the other 2 terrorists were fine. They wqorked on the fires and Kreel asked Bill what that was "It was a bomb jackass he used the microwave as a detionator." meanwhile in another part of the ship Casey, Jack,Boib and others were moving through killing russians along the way they planned to make a homemade time bomb but would need another tomahawk to take explosives and fuel from to make the bomb and something to make a timer for it. They reached the room where the Nuclear Tomahawks were stored they saw the one he dismatled earlier. They got the bomb all ready and set out for the Sub. Casey was leading the way to the shortest way possible to the sub. Casey brought them all to the sub where Casey saw that noone was about so he jumped on top of the sub knowing that they couldn't hear it and he went to the cannon on top of the sub knowing that it just might kill the sub if the cannon ammo below exploded too. Casey got the bomb set and ran to the ladder they made and climbed back on deck and heard a announcement that the sub was moving out about a range of 50 meters out the bomb went off it blew up the cannon but the sub armor was too thick then Casey saw the 5 inch guns and said to his freinds that they were gonna finish the sub. They got the powder and shells ready and Casey directed orders to them. "2.5 degrees Jack" Casey ordered. The cannon went 2.5 degrees "Fire in the hole" Casey said. There was a loud rumble as the shot rocked the ship and a loud clap was heard....... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted June 12, 2004 Author Share Posted June 12, 2004 Next and final part The shell was flything through the air and it was a miss they reloaded and fired a grazing hit took down the conning tower but it was still alive. "Fire in the Hole!" Casey yelled again he knew it was the killing blow and he fired then since the SEALs killed the reinforcements 4of the 5 people left went to see what was going on and they did not know that Casey and his freinds were wating weapons at the ready. Then Dave heard something he told the otheres to spread out Bill's private guard was only 1 person and he went into Casey's firing arc he got shot right in the head he fell. Casey's freinds were taking 2 people out when Dave's helper went to Casey he showed Casey some martial arts then Casey fillped him over his shoulders using his wrist as leverage. Then Casey grabbed the man's throat and pulled hard ripping some skin and throat out, he threw the peice of it over the side. Then Casey told his freinds that he was gonna go to the bridge they should get the people out of the forecastle so Casey went to the bridge while his Freinds went to the Forecasle for the hostages. Casey finnaly reached the bridge walking very quietly looking around gun in firing position the he heard a voice "Ill take that gun thank you" Casey gave it to him by tossing it twords him then he turned it was his old pal Bill. "Long time no see Bill" said Casey with a hint of laughter. Then Casey kicked the gun out of Bill's hands then sent him over a table Casey Drawing his Combat Knife. Bill picked up a cutting knife from the food they got earlier and then they engaged in a knife fight. The knives look like pipes moving very fast Casey getting very close to hitting Bill then Casey broke threw slashed Bill in the chest but Bill jumped back before Casey could sink it in. Clink,Clink was all you could hear form the knives then Casey tried to disarm Bill then Bil tried to slash Casey's head open but he nicked Casey above his right eye. Casey then with a quick move pushed in Bill's eye and blook was pouring out form his eye that was pushed in then Casey sunk the knife through the top of Bill's head. It was over the terrorist threat is over. Casey then grabbed his radio and called HQ to extract them off the boat and to get a esort. A doctor looked a Casey and told him he would need 4 stiches for that knife nick above the eye. Also told Casey that he would need t take him in so see about that hook in the back. After the U.S.S. Misouri Reached Calafornia a Funeral was given to every dead Navy Man and Marine Man Casey was dressed with honors and stood in the middle of the 2 rows formed you could see the Playboy Model in a Female Navy uniform. Casey was considred a hero that day and the Misouri was stripped of all ofits armament and took place in U.S. history..................... THE END hopefully u guys liked that story i sure did enjoy typing it and some of itw as from under siege but some i made up put any comments forthis story or what i should do with my next story Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sup Posted June 13, 2004 Share Posted June 13, 2004 SUP *DISMANTALING* A NUCLEAR TOMAHAWK sup dismantaling a nuke means taking out the pletonuim and the nuclear explovsives Christ i knew that scince i was 7 the condom was used as a button to detonate it when he was away and no it wasnt a nuke it was a homemade stachel charge I know what dismantle means, I just assumed that he used all of the parts. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarauderMike Posted June 14, 2004 Share Posted June 14, 2004 Casey was considred a hero that day and the Misouri was stripped of all ofits armament and took place in U.S. history..................... Hoooooaaaaaaaaaah. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted June 15, 2004 Author Share Posted June 15, 2004 Oh and i forgot Bob shot the Playboy model after the ceremony Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob The Nailer Posted June 17, 2004 Share Posted June 17, 2004 Oh and i forgot Bob shot the Playboy model after the ceremony I dropped bunker busters on her hillsides all night? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Posted June 17, 2004 Author Share Posted June 17, 2004 no bob u dropped a bullet on her head. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snared_gambit Posted June 17, 2004 Share Posted June 17, 2004 Oh and i forgot Bob shot the Playboy model after the ceremony I dropped bunker busters on her hillsides all night? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob The Nailer Posted June 18, 2004 Share Posted June 18, 2004 Did I pillage and plunder down under? Yes? No? Maybe so? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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