A little bit of advice on an otherwise good story. When there's dialogue, don't just say "said Pvt. Melinda, screamed Cpl. Janice, exclaimed Sgt. Candice". They're alright used in moderation but not in every single spoken line in the story. Hope that helps. Me's is good at the English.
All those weapon models were very good, apart from the nuke launcher which I thought looked a little splodgy. And that bug looks amazing! One question though. What are they gonna look like when they get shot? Will bits fly off of them like in the film and how will they look when they fall down?
Good job, Chems.
OK, you may or may not have noticed my abscence over the last few days. I've been away because I'm getting bogged down in study for my exams. I don't think it'd be right to continue my command when I can't play. So I'm appointing BK as team leader and Supa Sniper as his second in command.
I wont be able to play until probably the end of June, but hit me up on MSN at harmera@hotmail.com if you need some advice on organisation...I'm sure you wont though.